PLANNING - Mock Magazine Focus Group

I formed a focus group among 13 of my peers. I wanted them to look at a basic magazine cover I had made and give me advice on it. These are the comments they came up with:

- Needs a tag line

- Pug looks tacky

- Change font

- Reword mastheads

- Change colour and thickness of strokes

- Bar code is too big

- Move masthead higher